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LOST "Of Men & Serpents"

Postby RunningFox on Tue Mar 15, 2011 5:31 pm

It's a shame the whole LOST fan faction thing is dying out; I'm just getting into it!

Anyway, here's TWO ACTS of a LOST TV script I wrote. I have a general guideline as to how the rest of the episode plays out but maybe some one could offer up some fresh ideas...

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Re: LOST "Of Men & Serpents"

Postby RunningFox on Wed Mar 23, 2011 1:00 pm

I realize my timing's off -- enthusiasm for LOST has steadily been dying out over the last few months but I'm really keen to get some feedback on this script, otherwise I'll have no enthusiasm left for the work it would take to finish it. And I want to finish it!

It's had a few views -- any brave souls out there willing to venture their critique? :unsure:
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Re: LOST "Of Men & Serpents"

Postby WalterBishop on Sun Apr 10, 2011 11:27 am

It's good! :D
The new characters are strong and the dialogue feels very Lost-y.
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Re: LOST "Of Men & Serpents"

Postby canadianman30 on Tue Apr 12, 2011 1:15 pm

Hello

Good read.

I was wondering if you would like to co-write some other LOST script type episodes.
I am currently writing an alternate series using other characters.

If you are interested let me know.

Thank you
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