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Smoke Monster Song

Postby chalovak on Sat May 14, 2011 8:17 pm

Hey, everybody.
Some time ago I wrote a song about the smoke monster. Now I added music.
So here is the result (don't forget to turn annotations on for sync lyrics). Enjoy:


I am planning to create a video clip sometime.

Lyrics:
Smoky monster, yes, I am
I make sounds, scary as hell
Do not you mess with me, my friend
Or I will have to chop your hand

Tick tick tick Tock tock Tuck tuck
If you meet me - blame your luck
But if it's vacuum in your hand
You'll never see me on this land

I hate pilots, trees and fence
Boars hate - for they're dense
Cause pee in holes where I still live
Is way too lame - there's no forgive.

Tick tick tick Tock tock Tuck tuck
I change shapes but it can suck
For I can be a man or horse
But bumbershoot? no, never was!

I like the bald guys - they are bold
Becoming them - is all I want
Cause render hair is more than tough
And hairbrush showed us no love

Tick tick tick Tock tock Tuck tuck
I hate the island on which I stuck
I wish it's gone like never was
I will destroy it in one toss
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Re: Smoke Monster Song

Postby DarthLocke on Sun May 22, 2011 3:08 pm

:lol: :rofl: This is wonderful! :lol: It's so much better than before! I might have to post this to facebook, with your permission of course! It's just too good for the world not to see it! :lol:
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Yet for all their evolution, they form no bonds.
Love does not exist for them. They are incapable of dreaming,
Of contemplating beauty, Of knowing something greater than themselves.
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Re: Smoke Monster Song

Postby chalovak on Tue May 24, 2011 7:35 am

DarthLocke wrote::lol: :rofl: This is wonderful! :lol: It's so much better than before! I might have to post this to facebook, with your permission of course! It's just too good for the world not to see it! :lol:

Thanks for your kind words! Feel free to post it wherever you wish. Let the world know! :rofl:
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